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Justbleu
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0 posted 01-18-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

If I had only known
You always tried to brighten my life
To show me the silver lining in the darkest of clouds
Painted my dreams beautifully before my eyes
Bringing me to giggles when I cried
There to comfort me in the darkest of nights
Holding me so gently when I wanted to die
Never giving up when everyone else would
Understanding in that odd, peculiar, sweet sort of way
All of my silly, eccentric, strange talks and ways

**This is short and sweet*

© Copyright 2000 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-18-2000 03:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sometimes we can't see things when they are right in front of our face! It is so easy to take the ones who love us and who we love for granted...very nice poem, Bridgette!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Martie
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2 posted 01-18-2000 03:16 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is very sweet and tender.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 01-18-2000 03:42 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Bridgette...short and sweet, but oh so important. I only hope you shared this with the person it was written for and brightened their day like you have brightened ours  
Nicole
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4 posted 01-18-2000 04:11 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

I have to echo everyone above, this is definately short and sweet...and says SO much!     

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
Saxoness
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5 posted 01-19-2000 04:40 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

love it!

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

First__Knight
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6 posted 01-19-2000 06:26 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Do you by chance miss someone?  I agree with Ruth share this with them.  It is very good and tells much

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe

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7 posted 01-19-2000 07:08 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JustBleu-

A beautiful poem to be shared.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sonny
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8 posted 01-19-2000 11:18 AM       View Profile for Sonny   Email Sonny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sonny

JustBleu -
  
     What a sweet poem!  It is those little things in life that one gives to another without thought - just instinct - that makes a relationship so special.  Thank you for bringing a big smile to my face.

Sonny



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Toerag
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since 07-29-99
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9 posted 01-19-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Nice done 'bleu
Nate Dogg
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10 posted 01-19-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Short and sweet, just the way I like it. Nice poem!

 Nathan
 
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