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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Girl when you're with me, you make me happy. I would walk the sea for you because, my love is true. You're so special to me, you're the fire to my heat, and I'm so glad that we came to be so, I made special reservations for this day because, today is your birthday. I plan to treat you like a queen, in every single way, if you know what I mean. I bought you a king-size bed, that's velvety red, with the matching bed spread. I bought you a red corvette, that will put me in a little debt but, I don't care because, it's your birthday. I bought a Panasomic color TV, with the VCR. I went that far, to steal your heart, because, I love you. I felt that I could be a fool for you. That's why I bought all these expensive things, for your room. Girl, let me spend the night because the moment for us, is so right. And you don't have to cook because, I bought a cookbook. I'll do it all for you because, I want to. I'm satisfying your every need today because it's your birthday, my sweet lady. Nathan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! Sounds like quite a birthday, Nate!  Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you for the sweet comment Dysnder! Nathan |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Nate, Doing some catching up on reading and found this lavish birthday. Loved this part esp: I bought you a king-size bed, that's velvety red, with the matching bed spread. I bought you a red corvette, that will put me in a little debt Rus |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Quite a birthday there Nate....a very cute poem for I take it a very sweet lady!! Take Care Bridgette |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Man, when you go all out - you go all out. She must be very special. Michael |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Rus, Michael, and Justbleu for the nice comments. Nathan |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
What a wonderful birthday , what a lucky lady she is to have such a romantic in you Sweet poem |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Nate~ Um, did i forget to mention that MY birthday is in a couple of months? Great Birthday Poem, Nate...I'm sure will be graciously accepted by your queen. Sherry |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hey...my birthday was Jan 4th and it didn't go anything like that. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Hoot and Simply for the comments. Nathan |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
She must be very special to you Nate. She`s a very lucky woman to have a man with a heart as caring and kind as your`s. Good luck with the bill`s..lol and keep up the good work. |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Very lucky lady! She must be very special to you...quite the birthday! Tamera |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Geez and you couldnt even get me a card for my birthday? UH I see how it is hehe cute poem! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Sngldad for the nice comments. Thank you Tamera for the nice comments. And thank you Echo for the nice comments. Nathan |
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