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The promise of the pain.....

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The Jackal
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0 posted 01-13-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

it feels like the first time..
trying to convince them all
im just fine
so they can roll their eyes
dismiss me ..like i am to blame
why cant anyone leave me sane....
its going to be the last ride..
ill ever take
this constant ..repeating heartbreak
all the twitching muscles
all the pulsing veins
will never put the promise
back into the pain...


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1 posted 01-14-2000 12:15 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Great work!!!
devina
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2 posted 01-14-2000 03:09 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Very true, loved your last two lines, they say it all!

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thanks for this
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