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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2000-01-13 07:11 AM


Kamla

Sweet little butterfly with
Brightly coloured wings
Journeyed over into my heart
And now my heart, it sings

Your flutter touches me
With warmth and gentleness
You make my heart smile
I feel a sudden newness

Thank you sweet butterfly
From the depths of my heart
So glad you fluttered by
I promise to do my part


Dark Angel




 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-01-13 07:19 AM


Awwwwwww !
This is BEAUTIFUL ..
she'll love it.
Wonderfully done.
~*Marge*~

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Meadowmuse
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2 posted 2000-01-13 07:23 AM


What a delicately fashioned verse! Beautiful...

Dear LadyClaire


Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2000-01-13 07:50 AM


Dark Angel,
And what a beautiful butterfly she is.
A lovely poem from an angel
Liz

Poertree
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4 posted 2000-01-13 08:06 AM


Why did I suddenly think of Mohammed Ali's catch phrase "Floats like a butterfly, stings like a bee !!!" when I read this .......   just kidding.

Beautiful poem about a beautiful person .. I too have a trace of bright dust in my heart ..... ~smile~

Philip  


Michael
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5 posted 2000-01-13 09:32 AM


Beautiful poem, Dark Angel.  A beautiful tribute to a wonderful person.

Michael

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6 posted 2000-01-13 09:36 AM


Awwwww...Angel, she will love this    It's precious, it is! And isn't she deserving? A wonderful little poem for a sweetheart of a friend!  


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



Denise
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7 posted 2000-01-13 10:20 AM


Yes, this is sweet....for a sweetie!  

 Denise


Pepper
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8 posted 2000-01-13 11:25 AM


Sweet and beautiful Dark Angel...
A wonderful tribute to a most special young lady....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon



Dark Angel
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9 posted 2000-01-13 03:15 PM


Marge, Thank you so very much  
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Thank you Claire for your lovely comment.  
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Elizabeth, Indeed a beautiful butterfly!!!
Thank you.  
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Philip, thanks so much  
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Thank you Michael, she's most definately a wonderful person! and More!!  
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deserving she is! sweet Caroline  Thank you so much for your lovely reply.   *hugs* I hope you feel better soon sweetie!
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Thank you Denise!  
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Pepper, thank you so much!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Severn
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10 posted 2000-01-13 04:32 PM


M - you are a treasure - and only a hop step and a jump away really!

Thankyou my friend - you have honoured me...you truly have.

I haven't fluttered by - I have stopped right there beside you, and there my friend I shall stay!

Kamla  

WhtDove
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12 posted 2000-01-13 11:53 PM


DA this was beautiful! Forgive me for taking so long to reply! Haven't been in these parts much lately!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark



Dark Angel
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13 posted 2000-01-14 12:20 PM


Kamla, no sweet Butterfly,  you are a treasure!!! Thanks for fluttering   into my life! and there my friend I shall keep you  
*hugs*

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Dark Angel
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14 posted 2000-01-14 12:25 PM


Keeper, I am so glad it came back to you!!
thanks for your reply
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WhtDove Angel, thanks so much,I know what it can be like sometimes, life can just take over sometime, and we don't find the time for things we want to do. *hugs*  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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15 posted 2005-04-16 05:01 PM


precious
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