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Fragile

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neitham
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0 posted 01-13-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham


Often, inevitable , as it might seems.
The beaten path, what we choose to trod.
Sometimes, out of fear of change.
It is also helplessness at times.

The neon sign, writings on the wall.
Nothing deter, a single minded pursuer.
Perseverance, Sacrifices, Commitments.
In the end, what matter is the memory.

Misty eyed and clouded rationality.
This vow to win the only one favor.
Sentimental, irrational, emotional.
Fragile as it is, mighty is the heart!

Rejoice, for in tomorrow is a promise.
The sun surely will rise again.
Once more, freedom is just a breath away.
And life goes on, the way it has always been.

  
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1 posted 01-13-2000 01:10 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

'Rejoice, for in tomorrow is a promise'
Such a beautiful line! Very lovely!

 Denise

neitham
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2 posted 01-13-2000 03:19 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

Denise:
Thanks and am glad u like the poem  

devina
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Much to think about in this one...enjoyed the read!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Michael
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4 posted 01-13-2000 05:08 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Yep - the heart takes more blows than any other part of the body - for sure.  MIGHTY, indeed.  Good poem.


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neitham
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5 posted 01-13-2000 05:38 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

devina: yes indeed, lots to think about, thats what one sided love affair sometime does to a man!  

michael: glad you liked the poem, and yes, mighty is the heart.....
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6 posted 01-13-2000 07:08 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Jake -

This is very well written.

I like the line:

'Fragile as it is, mighty is the heart! '

Wow !  Mighty indeed.
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 01-13-2000 08:37 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Neithem, this is great certainly something to think about , WOnderful poem  
Alwye
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I needed to read something like this, thank you.  Exellent work.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

neitham
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9 posted 01-14-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

Thanks everyone for your much needed encouragements!
Marge: I am glad u liked this one.
Whiskey: I was afraid u might not read this...but I guess u does not normally dissappoint others  
Alwaye: Am happy u found this good reading...
 
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