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Michael
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0 posted 01-08-2000 02:38 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

RELIC

Blessed is he who finds his dream,
In lonely worlds of hope, dismayed.
Cruel be the fate, lining the seam,
That leaves but an image displayed.

In holding you, dream realized,
Will everything still be O.K.?
Or should you find me paralyzed,
Would you still love me anyway?

Will a beauty in me still awaken
Your eyes despite the scars I bear?
Or have I physically been taken
Beyond emotional repair?

Relic of a man I once was,
I can't help wonder if you see
The shell before you in its cause,
Or just a man I used to be.

Within my grasp lies Destiny,
"You make your own", I've heard them say.
As dream touches reality,
Will everything still be O.K.?


Michael Anderson


 It's the little things you take for granted,
That'll mean the most to you when they're gone.




© Copyright 2000 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
cokey_95
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1 posted 01-08-2000 02:45 AM       View Profile for cokey_95   Email cokey_95   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cokey_95

Very nice poem...sounds like it came from the heart
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 01-08-2000 08:41 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Awwwww....Michael, she is going to see you only as the beautiful person she fell in love with. Quit your worrying and just enjoy  
Mary
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3 posted 01-08-2000 09:29 AM       View Profile for Mary   Email Mary   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mary

Beautiful poem Michael.  I think you are worrying too much...She is going to love you even more than she does now.  I wish you luck (although, I know you won't need it)!  
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 01-08-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Michael, this piece speaks to the insecurities in us all, I believe. What an expressive way to pose this questioning thought. I enjoyed reading this.

Dear LadyClaire




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Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 01-08-2000 10:37 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Michael,
Excellent poem,
And as Yogi Barra used to say
It's not over till it's over.
So I would not worry. Sy
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Michael, I have all the faith that you two will come together and become one with each other through God's love for both of you. Give him your trust and let him lead you to happiness with Gennifer through eternity.
poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 01-08-2000 12:08 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I see my Michael is getting a bad case of the "21 days left" jitters!  ROFL  Don't feel bad babe, I am too!  That's what makes this whole thing wonderful...we have been loving and nurturing eachother now for almost 5 months, without even a dinner date, or even holding hands for a nice walk outside.....All this will be new to us, in just a few short days, and so no wonder your anxious!  I'm so excited, I'm already losing sleep!  Just remember my soul...I am the woman who has held you in our dreams, allowed you to play "safely" in our playground, and kissed you many many times electronically!     And rest assured, I know who you are, you are the man who has stood by me through thick and thin already - the one who allows me to fall asleep at night feeling at ease with my life, and the direction it's going.....I already love you, so why worry if I'm gonna "like" you....I know who you are and I just want to hold you now in "real" arms....kiss your "real" lips.....Our souls will remember eachother when we meet.....Fear not, for fear is not of God....Listen at me, preaching at myself here too!   hehehe  I love this poem, it shows me you are indeed human, as I am too.  You will be at peace soon my love, in my arms....

 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!
Local Rebel
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8 posted 01-08-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Only a quiet echo from the back of a mind that wonders if he deserves to be this happy.. and he does.  Best of luck
Nan
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9 posted 01-08-2000 04:03 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Well - I happen to know that no girl in her right mind would ever be disappointed with anything about this man.... and certainly Pff won't be.... She's much too sensitive.... All well be well, my friends....
WhtDove
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10 posted 01-09-2000 01:11 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

At ease Michael. I hope she just dispelled your fears up there. Case of shaken feet. hehe...all will go just fine!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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