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Angel: Wanted

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devina
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0 posted 01-06-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina


My gorgeous angel above,
I beckon thee to come.

On wings of utter grace,
I'll bid farewell this place.

Blanket me in security,
All my trust I put in thee.

Make me forget my past mistakes,
Make me forgive for heaven's sake.

Erase my worldly fears inside,
The lonely nights I laid to cry.

Bring back passion to my life,
Show me love without sacrifice.

Be the one to make me whole,
Bring completeness to my soul.

Only then will I be free-
To love such a man as thee.
© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 01-06-2000 02:39 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Devina,
Hey Denina when your through with that angel would you send her around to me. Beautiful poem, enjoyed the read. Sy
LngJhnAg
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2 posted 01-06-2000 02:40 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Hah!  This poem ain't about Toerag!  He's a devil, not an angel.  That leaves room for the rest of us (*patting down my hair and putting innocence in my eyes*).  This was a very sweet poem, Devina.
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3 posted 01-06-2000 02:43 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Yeah, we all could use someone like that, Devina. Well said (prayed?).

Elizabeth

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Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York."


Betty Gravitt
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4 posted 01-06-2000 02:44 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

I could use an angel like that.  
Wonderful poem devina.


 B Gravitt


JamesMichael
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5 posted 01-06-2000 02:51 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

devina . . . So beautiful . . . James
Nan
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6 posted 01-06-2000 02:51 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Oh yeah Angels are special.....
Shhhhh LongJohn....
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devina,

Only a true angel could write like one.

James
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8 posted 01-06-2000 06:31 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Sy- Well I was sorta picturing a MAN angel, but if you want...LOL  Maybe he has a sister for ya!??

LJ- The innocent look??? If you say so!

Elizabeth- thanks for the agreement, if only it were as easy as wanting & getting!!

Betty- Well when I'm done with him, SY already has 2nd bid ha ha, but I"ll be sure to pass on the word!

James- Thank you dear, my- we do have alot of James in here now! (not that itsa bad thing!)

Nan- I think you have a picture for everything hun, and a beautiful picture at that!

James- What a romantic you are, and thank you...


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
whiskey
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9 posted 01-06-2000 08:36 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is Beautiful Devina , Angels are a favorite of mine  
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10 posted 01-06-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Let me add a beautiful, as well!     

 Denise

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Lord knows, we all need an angel at our sides!

Lovely!


Corinne
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12 posted 01-06-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Let me say thanks to you girls, now comes the hard part....waiting for that angel of mine!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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