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Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01
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Australia

0 posted 2000-01-06 04:40 AM


I miss the way you touch me,
And i miss the way you smile,
I miss the warmth of your embrace,
And i miss your deep dark eyes,
Why cant we see each other?
Is how im feeling wrong?
I knew it wasn't gonna be forever,
But we werent together long,
I want to run to you,
And fall into your arms,
I want to kiss you just once more,
So that my restlessness can calm,
But you feel so very distant,
Like you've pulled right back from me,
I so wish that things were different,
Because i miss you terribly.

© Copyright 2000 Jen - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-01-06 04:55 AM


Very sad indeed.

Been there!

K

Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01
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2 posted 2000-01-06 05:16 AM


Thanx for your reply Severn,
Things are OK now though : )

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-01-06 08:01 AM


Moonshine, this is really beautiful and sad, but beautiful.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01
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4 posted 2000-01-06 09:01 AM


Thanx for your reply DA,
I appreciate and value your comments hon : )

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2000-01-06 01:46 PM


Awwww Hun, sounds like you are missing someone very much. I am sorry to here that. ((((HUGS))))
Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01
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6 posted 2000-01-06 11:06 PM


Thanx for your comment Hoot,
Yes, when I wrote that poem I was missing someone terribly but things are different now and I don't miss that person so much cause they are in my life again as a friend.

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