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It takes two baby
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It takes two baby GO while the getting is good... and Go before your HEART gets too attached. Can't you see that you're beginning a relationship that will never last. How could it fail you boldly say....... I don't think it will fail in any way. Truly, it will fail because one of you doesn't have their share of care, and sooner not later they will walk away. Are you the one that doesn't care....no silly.... its the other one who's heart is in outer space. Have you seen any commitment, do they really care, do both of your hearts share a special place? The truth is you're not really their ideal and you definately are not soulmates. I gotta admit that you're "BTN" as in better than nothing, and I've watched you skating by on thin ice while they cruised along on roller skates. Hey, how about admitting it, the mutual attraction and the chemistry just are not there. And yes, this is not your imagination, they are only pretending that they care. Soon enough they will be leaving you as you are standing there wearing your feelings out there on your sleeve. Yep, they will be gone and you will be standing there all alone as you could ever be, right out in the open for all your friends and acquaintances to see. You may agree or disagree, but I say it takes two baby. Come on, listen to me, don't give so freely to those who don't want to receive. JamesLee@October1999 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 01-21-2000).] |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Great poem  |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Now you've done it I can't get the song out of my head. "It takes two baby, it takes two baby, just me and you, it takes two." BE VERY GLAD you can't hear me singing it. Nice poem, Paul |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Whiskey for reading and commenting on my write. Somehow your name makes me thirsty, but actually my preference is cognac, and only on special occasions. Thank you Paul I'm glad you liked this. Maybe you also had a few experiences with one sided relationships. James |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This would make a great song! And yes, it definitely takes two! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Denise for reading and commenting on my poem. James |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
One-sided love is the worst, may you find your soulmate soon dear!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Been there, done this one  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm on your side Devina, yes may I. Hoot Owl I bet I've done it more times than you. James |
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Vampire'sMistress Junior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 19 |
Denise is right, this would be wonderful lyric for a ballade. although it would be hard to make the music as good as your poem. VM |
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brandywine Junior Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 19Illinois |
That really hit home..... this is basically what is going on on my life right now. Great poem...... Brandy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
VM you are really sweet and you make me feel good. Brandy I'm sorry things are not working out for you. I've went thru this so many times and sometimes you choose this because you are afraid you will be alone. Anyway we will have lots of friends in our lives, and some lovers, but only a few wives, so most relationships are only learning experiences preparing us for the real thing so enjoy them while they last. Friendships can be heaven sent. James |
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