How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #5 Archive
 soar eyes
 1 2 3
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

soar eyes

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Kevin
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 11-02-1999
Posts 752
Torrington, Ct, Usa


0 posted 01-03-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

A morning like the ones before
grown ill with repetition.
With same old sights, my eyes grew soar
begging for  a new vision.

Till afternoon came with a site
that brought me to my knees
a brilliance in the rays of light
found me upon the breeze.

The smile that she sent my way
could stop a heart from beating
and words I struggled hard to say
to justify the meeting

she walked on bye, my eyes went low
to hold her grace forever
but images I had let go.
My heart began to sever

an evening like the ones before
grown ill with repetition
with same old sights, my eyes grew soar
than closed in self submission.

© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Deborah
Junior Member
since 01-03-2000
Posts 41


1 posted 01-03-2000 08:59 PM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

Very nice, I especially liked the first and last part of you poem.
   Deborah
Meadowmuse
Member Elite
since 12-27-1999
Posts 3317


2 posted 01-03-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Interesting how you give the reader an intriguing glimpse into what could be symbolic of a lifetime.

Dear LadyClaire
whiskey
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 12-28-1999
Posts 1302
Australia


3 posted 01-03-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful poem Kevin, but then all your poems Ive read are wonderful  
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #5 >> soar eyes Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors