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Force Of Nature (Written with First_Knight in a game of poetry tag)

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hoot_owl_rn
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Force Of Nature

Feelings shared without one word
In touch are volumes said
We dance together in this life
Two birds with wings outspread

Souls that circle ‘round one light
Like moths drawn to a flame
Heart’s desires pulls on us
And nothing is the same

Nature’s laws at full abreast
Our blood is flowing wild
Two as one for all to see
The fear of love defiled

Waves of passion keep us close
We’re drifiting on the sea
Storms may come and storms may go
But you belong with me

David...thanks for the help. It was a lot of fun writing this with you.


 "I am nothing special, of this I am sure. I am a common man with common thoughts and I've led a common life. There are no monuments dedicated to me and my name will soon be forgotten, but I've loved another with all my heart and soul, and to me , this has always been enough." ~Nicholas Sparks from The Notebook
© Copyright 2000 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 01-03-2000 03:30 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is beautiful Ruth, Well Done both of you!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


devina
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2 posted 01-03-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I think you both have something worth hangin on to.  Good poem too!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 01-03-2000 03:39 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This is COMPATIBILITY.
And a great poem, too
Liz
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 01-03-2000 03:47 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Dark Angel...thanks, we had a lot of fun doing this one, perhaps we'll write more together

devine...I'm not sure how to respond to that, so I'll just say thanks for now

Liz...compatibility is a good thing, but there is a lot of other things that must factor in....thank you

Denise
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5 posted 01-03-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I'll just say beautiful, to the both of you!

 Denise

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6 posted 01-03-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Too many cooks may spoil the pot its true,
But when it comes to making love,
It's obviously better with two!

Nice job!

 How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius
Songbird
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7 posted 01-03-2000 05:35 PM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Very,very nice. Enjoyed it very much!
jaxjoy
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8 posted 01-03-2000 05:40 PM       View Profile for jaxjoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jaxjoy

Beautiful work.  Well done both of you!!
First__Knight
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9 posted 01-03-2000 06:23 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

My dear Lady Ruth,

Doing this was such an honor that when we started I could hardly begin.  Your talent overshadows any I might bring to the table. Sharing with you in this was a gift from you that I will never be able to fully repay.  But if I must be in debt, being in debt to you seems most a gift in all its own.  

Thank you all for response as I only held the candle.....Ruth is the  light and that which makes any of this shine  

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"


hoot_owl_rn
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Denise, jaxjoy, Rebel and Septsong...thank you all very much  

David...you underestimate your own talents, yes, I know you had many reservations about doing a poem with me, but I'm glad you broke past those barriers and did. Thank you
Pepper
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11 posted 01-03-2000 06:46 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I really do not know what poetry tag is, but I do know that it worked here...
Very beautiful work and I commend you both....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


Echo Rhayne
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12 posted 01-05-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

You two did a great job with this one!!  


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~
hoot_owl_rn
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Thank you Pepper and Echo
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