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By Katie - daughter of winterinblue

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winterinblue
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0 posted 12-29-1999 05:14 AM       View Profile for winterinblue   Email winterinblue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for winterinblue


If a daughter is to keep alive
her inborn sense of trust...
she needs the companionship of
a beloved parent who can share
it; keeping alive for her the
security and joy of the world
she should know...  The pain of
my loss has abandoned me in a
terrible vacuum.



[This message has been edited by winterinblue (edited 01-24-2000).]
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Severn
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1 posted 12-29-1999 05:26 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

And pain is like how I feel after reading this:

Welcome, winterinblue and Katie - hope you can share your pain here and know you are safe.

Tenderly expressive poem.

K



 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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3 posted 12-29-1999 06:54 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Katie - thank you for sharing your sorrow.  Writing is a good skill for comfort.  

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4 posted 12-29-1999 09:46 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Welcome Katie...your writing portrays your depths of emotion...(((hugs))) to you dear, and please keep writing. You will find that your heart eases when it flows through your pen.

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


hoot_owl_rn
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Oh, how sad  
Echo Rhayne
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6 posted 12-30-1999 02:48 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I must 'echo' the replies of everyone else!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Astraea
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7 posted 12-30-1999 02:50 AM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

That's so lovely...  What a sad, yet beautifully simple, piece of art.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

 
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