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Open Poetry #5

By Katie - daughter of winterinblue

winterinblue
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 32

0 posted 1999-12-29 05:14 AM

If a daughter is to keep alive
her inborn sense of trust...
she needs the companionship of
a beloved parent who can share
it; keeping alive for her the
security and joy of the world
she should know... The pain of
my loss has abandoned me in a
terrible vacuum.

[This message has been edited by winterinblue (edited 01-24-2000).]

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-12-29 05:26 AM

And pain is like how I feel after reading this:

Welcome, winterinblue and Katie - hope you can share your pain here and know you are safe.

Tenderly expressive poem.

K

...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

3 posted 1999-12-29 06:54 AM

Katie - thank you for sharing your sorrow. Writing is a good skill for comfort.

[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 01-24-2000).]

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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4 posted 1999-12-29 09:46 AM

Welcome Katie...your writing portrays your depths of emotion...(((hugs))) to you dear, and please keep writing. You will find that your heart eases when it flows through your pen.

It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-12-29 10:30 AM

Oh, how sad

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

6 posted 1999-12-30 02:48 AM

I must 'echo' the replies of everyone else!

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

7 posted 1999-12-30 02:50 AM

That's so lovely... What a sad, yet beautifully simple, piece of art.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

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