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ashame, it will be better for me to stop

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Charisma
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0 posted 02-09-2001 01:02 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

yesterday I posted a poem Challenge from Poet DeVine...and I was glad that Marge warned me for the misspelling of the word foul....it must be fool. I didn't check that word out in my dictionary before I wrote it down.....and it blew up my poem.

well it made me sad,  to see that and maybe I have done that in my other poems too...so I think
that it is better for me to stop writing in english....if its not my language, but I always love it to write in these beautiful language.

I want to thank Marge for being a real friend, and mailed me about the word.....you are a True friend, and maybe everyone was laughing when they read my silly word,.....but well that's why I think it will be better to stop writing.

Thank you all for your support, but I'm still unsure now if it all was meant.


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1 posted 02-09-2001 02:52 AM       View Profile for Krawdad   Email Krawdad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krawdad

I would suggest that you do not stop.  Now that I know this about your poetry, I would read it differently and I might ask questions or make some suggestions to you, if that would be helpful (though I am merely a user of the language, not an expert).  I wish I knew another language well enough to attempt what you are doing.  You should be proud of your success.
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2 posted 02-09-2001 07:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Charisma~
You little sweetie - you'd better not stop writing !
You just keep being your adorable self and as you'd asked me before -
I'll continue to e-mail you so you may know, learn and grow.

I've always invited friends to e-mail me if they see something I've missed.

Your poem was BEAUTIFUL and you need to put it back ! !
Darling - no one laughs AT a friend -
Now get your booty busy and replace that poem.

LOL !  I can write in English and English with a southern accent ...
but I can't do the beauty of what you do !
Love you, sweet poet~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 02-09-2001 09:28 AM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

why stop now?
this should encourage you to write more
keep your head up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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4 posted 02-09-2001 11:02 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Charisma, I sent you an E-mail.  Hugs, Sun
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5 posted 02-09-2001 03:20 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Thank you all  for your support, and I am glad that Marge gived me back my encourage to put myself inhere again and to repost the poem.

thank you once again for your kind and sweet support.

And I do appreciate it to hear, if I made misstakes....or use the language wrong.
because I want to learn and grow, and I can't do that without help.....

love Charisma.


[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-09-2001).]
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7 posted 02-09-2001 10:37 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I don't think you should stop writing..put a note in the 'critique' section and ask for emails about spelling errors..we ALL make them!

Don't worry...besides, I read with my heart not my head.  
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8 posted 02-10-2001 07:18 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Poet deVine; thank you and your words that you read with your heart and not with your head.......well they enlighted my heart.....(don't know if that's a good expression) *lol*
and I will make a note in my "critique"section....yes I will do that.
thank you for your opninion my friend
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Charisma, please don't stop writing... you write wonderful poetry. This is my only language and I make so many spelling errors... I use a spell check but it doesn't get words that are spelled write for other meanings so sometimes its of no help... Its just a part of our learning process... I not going to stop writing english because I can't spell, or because my grammer is fairly bad too... So don't stop, we'd miss you muchly.  

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You can always post questions in the English forum..and those who know the answers will be willing to help.  
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11 posted 02-10-2001 03:23 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

when you crash into a wall....get up....climb it....and keep going.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
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12 posted 02-10-2001 07:39 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

*wow* thank you all for your wonderful help and support.....and I don't stop write in english....as Marge and Sunshine gives me my encourage back.
and all your support gives me the feeling that my decision was right.

and Parker, I do understand that you make misstakes in your own language, but when you reads it back, you can caught them much easier than I do, cause its your language...the grammatic of my languages, is different than the grammatic of English.....so I was afraid that I made a lot of misstakes without knowing that.

Poet deVine I will check the English forum out, haven't visit that one before.

And Dopey Dope.....yeah easy talk my friend.....but sometimes is the wall hard..or to high....and well....can't deny that you are right....so I allready get up my feets now.

thank you all......for your advise and warm support......


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13 posted 02-11-2001 02:24 PM       View Profile for Mother_Earth   Email Mother_Earth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mother_Earth

Hey, there gal, you do better with this your second language ( I had to look that up ) than I and alot of others.  So am glad you aren't going to quit.  Love your work.  
         Hugs, ME
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14 posted 02-11-2001 04:44 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Charisma, how could I have missed another Dutch person? LOL Now PIP has tow Dutch women writing in English.     If I can help you in any way please don't hesitate to email me and don't stop writing. You have no idea how many mistakes I made in the beginning (I still make them   ) and I know like no other how hard some things are to translate.

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Please believe me that I make mistakes with my English and it is my first and only language. Of course, with my Texas accent people would tell you I really slaughter the English language when I speak. I feel that when one takes on another language, that by using it and making mistakes that others help correct only makes them more proficient in it. Keep up the good work!
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16 posted 02-11-2001 05:39 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Mother Earth thank you, and yes I am glad that I am still around....love to write, and passions is a good place to share with or without misstakes. and English is my third language as I speak the language of Indonesia too...my birth land

Munda: nice to meet ya....and its nice to see another dutch person inhere, haven't catch you before too. ....thank you for your advice and for your offering to help....its great to receive a lot of warmth inhere.

Inot2B: thank you my friend, thank you for being such a nice person....and I'll stay, how could I stop with so many friends inhere...

Thank you all for your wonderful friendship  and support.....love ya all
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17 posted 02-11-2001 07:06 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Don't you dare stop writing...I think you are charming and your poetry is beautiful.
HUGS to you lady, and? NO SHAME.  Shame is for the judgemental who would laugh...and lord have mercy on ME...as I am a rotten typist and hasty in a proofread...so go out there in open? AND POST.
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18 posted 02-11-2001 11:53 PM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

Well Charisma join the club
i am french and i make quite a few mistakes when i write, like the door shot instead of shut  
the english people are very friendly and uplifting

monique
 
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