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Ara New Member
since 2000-12-19
Posts 7 |
Whispers on the wind Soft words lingering in The mist of a starry night The flame that lights up The darkened eyes Of a tortured soul Dancing within the flame Of passions fiery Though never long enough To feel its heat As a delicate hand runs over The heightened fire Its warmth comforting Yet pulling away In fear of being burned The frozen walls that carefully Guard the heart Slowly melt Though the chance to dance within The flame of such passion Slowly dies down to soft licks Of a dying fire For one had missed The opportunity to dare the Eternal flame |
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SystemErroR Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 13 |
*smiles* I would know your heart anywhere...... |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
"he who hesitates....." welcome to passions..This was a strong piece..keep em' coming. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
...and not making a choice is a choice. Nice piece that I enjoyed reading. "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Oh i enjoyed that very much.  Suzanne I look forward to more |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Wow...this poem is stirring....keep them coming. BTW (By the way) Welcome to Passions! --Lil' Girl -PS. This reminded me of a poem I posted a while back. Here's the URL: /pip/Forum27/HTML/001456.html |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Ara! I enjoyed your poem! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ara~ Welcome to the hearth of Passions. Thanks for bringing your verse to share. And a lovely one it is. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
welcome to passions, Ara! this is a wonderful piece to start wif! delightfully surreal and inspiring! keep posting yeah! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Bravo! I hope you find this kind of passion in love soon... --Jamie--  |
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