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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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thunder cracks a whip lightning flashes in anger raging hail beating... deafening silence...storm passed why did you hit me mommy -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
You did a fabulous job here... so sad!! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh~ How sadly this one lays. Too true ... all too true. Touching job on a tender subject. One can see the innocent eyes, questioning. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
jaimie- thanks so much for reading. your comments are greatly appreciated.  marge- thank you, my friend, for your kind words. Your responses mean alot to me. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
OMG! ...wow..i didnt see that one coming..that hit like a ton-a-bricks..... regaining my composure..this one chills.. great writing tricks..sad subject  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow. This one caught me by surprise, very well written. Thanks for sharing it with us |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad Denise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- WOW! That kind of reaction from you is a huge compliment. Really glad this one struck you. Lakewalker- Thanks so much for the compliment. I really appreciate the response. Denise- Yes, this is a very sad subject, and one very close to my heart. Thanks for reading. THANK YOU ALL AGAIN!!  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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