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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas

0 posted 2000-08-03 03:34 AM



I have these little radars
who know the good from bad.
For my little radars
repeat the things I've said.

Sometimes these little raskels
bring joy unto my soul.
Other times I squint my face
as they repeat
the things I've told!

Oh' these little radars,
God's gift to families!
They detect the good and bad
unknown to them in deeds.

They repeat, with feedback
corrections we must make!
Detections from the life we lead
reflections in our Radar Gang.


© Copyright 2000 Alle'cram - All Rights Reserved
Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
1 posted 2000-08-03 06:46 AM


Alle'cram,
  You've said a mouthful here, words have a way of coming back and haunting us when poorly spoken, or can bring us pride when our words are wisely chosen. Well Done!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
2 posted 2000-08-03 10:00 AM


Very astounding, Alle'cram!!! U paint a picture wif ur words...incredible! *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
3 posted 2000-08-03 11:00 AM


Marcy this is just wonderful...and oh so true...just love the "little radars."  Bonnie
Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
4 posted 2000-08-03 11:27 AM


Thanks Dennis, Michelle and Bonnie for reading and replying.
I wrote this after my four year old grandson repeated a no-no in public, yes, said from my own mouth. My radar was turned on and working full blast that day.  
Thanks all.

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