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kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

0 posted 2000-07-04 10:33 AM


Love

The flowers bloom,
Every Spring.
So does love,
Or so it seems.


Love when whole,
Can be so strong,
As ten thousand,
Healthy arms.

All that's needed,
For love to start,
Is a soul,
With an open heart.

My heart waits,
Just for you.
May your love,
Guide you to.

These aching arms,
All alone,
Longing for someone,
To welcome home.

Of all the wonders,
Of this world.
Loves the greatest,
Let it come head over heels.




Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

© Copyright 2000 Kevin A. Lormand - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-07-04 10:48 AM


Kevin, This is nice, I like it.  
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-07-04 07:30 PM


a very clear point here is made enjoyed it very much and do keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
3 posted 2000-07-06 11:42 PM


Preetty realistic. Yet simple and sweet. If only love bears less tragedies...hehheh *S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-07-07 03:07 AM


Kevin,
  Ah yes, that elusive love, DON'T give up!
Persistance pays off! Nice poem!
Dennis :^)

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2000-07-07 05:07 AM


Kevin; The longing makes love all the sweeter when it comes to your heart. Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
6 posted 2000-07-07 07:32 PM


really enjoyed this poem simply perfect.

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
7 posted 2000-08-11 04:57 AM


^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^

Hehe..  
-Lynne

Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

8 posted 2000-08-11 09:17 AM


I love this one!!!! Written so beautifully...I pray to find a love like that soon!.....beth

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
9 posted 2000-08-11 10:25 AM


Happy love hunting, even though it's past spring, it can still happen
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
10 posted 2000-08-11 11:05 AM


love IS the greatest isnt it kevin  

this is such a sweet sentiment  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
11 posted 2000-08-11 06:53 PM


Kevin, I liked the simplicity with which you spoke.     Very lovely.   marcy
Sven
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12 posted 2000-08-12 01:43 AM


Kevin,
      don't worry. . . you'll find it. . . and her. . .

Excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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