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dgvarner
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0 posted 2000-08-11 12:47 PM


come to me softly
fervent whispers on your breath
touch me with your heart

-dgvarner
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"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran



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Parker
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1 posted 2000-08-11 01:18 AM


Lips in quivers rush
Touch upon touch in sweet kiss
Fulfilling your heart

Parker

Little_Spyro
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2 posted 2000-08-11 01:40 AM


Beautiful piece here
Much like the inner depths of
The poet's true soul.  

Incredible piece
Senryu worth treasuring
For the rest of time.

Little Spyro T. Dragon


Watching the poets
Passions' guardian dragon
Moves with the rhymes' flow.

kaile
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3 posted 2000-08-11 05:27 AM


dgvarner, moi think you write good senyrus yet you seldom post them here....pls do post more for our pleasure
BSC
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4 posted 2000-08-11 08:02 AM


dg - So few words, so much tenderness.  Wonderful. Bonnie
Dennis L. White
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5 posted 2000-08-11 08:22 AM


GgV,

Sweet whispers beckon
Hearts open invitation
Rapture soon to come

Beautiful senual senryu!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

dgvarner
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6 posted 2000-08-11 11:01 AM


woohoo!  chilly willy(aka parker!), ya killin me!!  you live where?  run baby run..meet me HERE!!  LOL

Ltl spyro: you know i love to hear from you, you master poet!  thanks for the poetic response  

kaile: aw..youre too kind    actually i post them when i write them, i mean theyre so short after all..why not aye!

bonnie: thank you thank you!...*bowing in secret pleasure at such a kind response*  

woohoo dennis!! i'm liking that one too!!   you guys are the ones that are so good at this!!     love the poetic responses  

dg



"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Jon Mewett
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7 posted 2000-08-11 11:12 AM


A moment captured...lovely.

Jon

Parker
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8 posted 2000-08-11 12:17 PM


A Kiss

Thunder in the mind
madness engulfs the body
wanton lips shall meet.




dgvarner
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9 posted 2000-08-11 10:38 PM


thank you JON!  

good one PARKER!  thunder? madness? sounds good to me...   lol

dg



"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


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