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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i fell to sleep < !signature-->in your arms far away from the truth-- yet a breath away from lonliness; in my mind you pulled me close and held me there you warmed me with your presence you inspired me with your very existance... i fell asleep in peaceful ignorance ...of the lonely truth --dgvarner "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 06-14-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great writing! This is beautifully done! Denise |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Dreams can allow us a little respite from the harsh realities of life sometimes, can't they? Very nice! Debbie |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Exellent the dream of the desire.  Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
to sleep in the tender touch of a loved one, away from the daunting truth....Lovely love ur poetry, dgvarner..your poems are always so short yet so big on truth and sentiments Keep up the good work! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey, thanks guys, for your comments debbie..i only wish dreams lasted a little longer sometimes.. kaile..extra thanks to you  i think i'm better at the short-and-sweet ones--sometimes when i write long poetry, i just keep repeating myself, and never quite get the point across!thanks again all of you for your replies! dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautifully written in my mind you pulled me close and held me there you warmed me with your presence you inspired me with your very existance... great poem. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful poem. Really enjoyed it !  |
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