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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 138


0 posted 2000-06-17 12:30 PM


Thy Mist

Thy mist o'er yonder horizon
awaits ye treasured laughter
as ye gallop forth from mission
I'll be on thy steed chasing after.

Know not thy wholeness of soul
for whilst I think of thee kindly
thee mind spins out of control
leaving thy heart beating blindly.

Thy future cast in stones thrown
silence of angel's voices frighten
stillness of thy night dances alone
as thy dawn seeks sun to brighten.

Withering days now blessed in light
combing thine goals edges of time
shadows now shinning with insight
as thy mist clears mine heart chimes.


© Copyright 2000 Esmeralda Ponsonby - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-06-17 12:37 PM


Withering days now blessed in light
combing thine goals edges of time
shadows now shinning with insight
as thy mist clears mine heart chimes.

wow...beautifully spoke, has a classically feel to it a timeless quality like love itself. a wonderful poem.

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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

"Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso

"We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde


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kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
2 posted 2000-06-17 01:03 PM


Wonderful way of saying what you feel.  

"Know not thy wholeness of soul
for whilst I think of thee kindly
thee mind spins out of control
leaving thy heart beating blindly"

while i like you i do not love you as you love me.  Well written.  

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

White Knight
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since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

3 posted 2000-06-17 01:47 PM


Esmeralda,
M'Lady fair,
Thy words dance nimbly,
Off thy tounge,
To mine ears music,
Like carols sung,
By angels in thy Mist!

Beautiful melodic verse!
Thy White Knight salutes Thee!

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2000-06-18 09:50 AM


Such pleasure to see you write in this so typical style of yours. Great poem !
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