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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-05-09 06:40 PM


I Am

I am a complex dreamer who desires life to be conflict free
I wonder if our world stopped revolving would anyone notice
I hear voices in my mind trying to motivate me into action
I see beyond reality and know everyone exhibits potential
I want all my yesterday's packed away for a new tomorrow
I am a complex dreamer who desires to be conflict free

I pretend because it let's me explore the depths of my mind
I feel connected to life through all my family and close friends
I touch lightly so not to break something that is very fragile
I worry about not living up to expectations I have for myself
I cry when I feel I have failed someone and they become sad
I am a complex dreamer who desires to be conflict free

I understand perplexities will happen whenever we're not looking
I say a rainbow is life's big huge colorful smile come to life
I dream all the time of reaching a level of mature happiness
I try to be the best person I can so to reflect on everyone I know
I hope to successfully continue being a good friend and companion
I am a complex dreamer who desires to be conflict free


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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-09 07:56 PM


Very nice, Gloria! Sounds just like you!  

Denise

twinsgd
Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
2 posted 2000-05-10 01:15 AM


Great poem Gloria...
This "I am" thing sure does get revealing though....

Jack

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
3 posted 2000-05-10 01:46 AM


Challenge well met.. Very nice...  


 I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

Strosek
Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61
Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa
4 posted 2000-05-10 09:07 AM


very nice Gloria, definatly shows the person I've come to know on ICQ over the past weeks.  

 May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights.



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