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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
In Your Eyes In your eyes... I see hurt buried deep inside. I feel the pain in your heart And see it devestate you, An inner Tornado. I see you in tears... The memories of happy days gone by Running down your face. A flash-flood of grief and misery, Drowning you in Desolation. Yet... You return hatred with love. Contempt with respect: The one who pushed you away is rewarded. With your unconditional love. I understand... Your intense thoughts and feelings, Your intricate pattern of emotion, Your tangled web of life: I know why you are the way you are. I know.. Your every feeling And why you feel the way you do: For you are my reflection. We are one. Your eyes are the mirrors to my soul. ----------------------------------------------------- This is the first poem I ever wrote, in June of 1999. I actually wrote it to include in a piece of English Course work. Since then, I haven't been able to stop writing poetry...except for the odd dose of writer's block. Anyway, I just wanted to share my first-ever poem with Passions People. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This one is wonderful,your first hey WOW. Funny how Eyes can say so much. Great Jon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! Your first ever poem, I am impressed! This is excellent, Lizzie! Denise |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
"Your eyes are the mirrors to my soul." Powerful. Are closed eyes the shutters of the heart?< !signature--> May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. [This message has been edited by John the cat (edited 05-04-2000).] |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Wow, this is excellent, I love your thoughts in it. I'm glad you shared it here.  |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
wow Lizzie, this is so awesome.. such a stunning piece of work! This was your first poem? wow, hehe.. my first poem was pretty bad.. when I was 11 I think.. very well done.. glad u posted this one. ^_^ Lyne |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Wow...if only I could meet a man who could see this in me! You've described me perfectly here! Awesome, as Yu Lan said! ~~Jamie  "I keep breaking all the promises That I keep making to myself You'd think by now that I'd be over this Instead I'm feeling sorry for myself So why does everything seem desperate now? I should be feeling so alive But it feels like something's missing Something's wrong somehow It feels like something deep inside has died..." --Stabbing Westward |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
eyes..hurt..tears...love..respect..feelings..a full range of emotions.. I love it breezeinnc |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Beautiful Lizzie surprise ending....very nice. Jack |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi Lizzie, The mirrow reflected a beautiful soul. "You return hatred with love. Contempt with respect: The one who pushed you away is rewarded. With your unconditional love." Great poem, and Your First!!wow, marcy |
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