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Casonova
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since 2000-04-29
Posts 35
Mays Landing

0 posted 2000-04-29 01:48 PM



They could'nt show.
  The love that was so strong.
Because if others were to know
  they'd say it was wrong.
So they stayed apart
  knowing they would die
if someone were to get smart
  and find out their lie
but instead of growing weak.
  there love still grew
until it came to a peak
  and there was nothing to do
but to let it all out.
  in a night full of love
that left them without a doubt
  It was a gift from above

But finally they were caught
  And asked to repent
but no one would have thought
  they wouldn't be bent.

we have commited no sin..
  Is the answer they gave
and in the end we will win
  cause our soul we did save
And so they both died
  For a cause they found right
for love they hadn't denied
  And had proved it that night
So they loved unto death
  And their love did not sway
And so they took their last breath
   knowing they couldn't take it away

© Copyright 2000 Daniel R Cuellar - All Rights Reserved
ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-29 02:37 PM


This is a lovely poem! Beautiful! Welcome to Passions and I am looking forward to reading more of your work soon!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-04-29 02:44 PM


Welcome to Passions, Casanova! This has a 'Romeo & Juliet' feel to it. Please check your e-mail for a special welcome!

Denise

PrincessPoet
Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.
3 posted 2000-04-29 02:51 PM


Welcome, to Passions Corner Pub! Beautifully sad poem. I hope you enjoy your stay. Keep Writing I'll keep Reading

 Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet


John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
4 posted 2000-04-29 04:20 PM


Welcome to the pub. Read us another soon please.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Casonova
Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 35
Mays Landing
5 posted 2000-04-29 09:48 PM


I just wanted to thank you all so much for the warm welcome, It makes me feel right at home. thank you, And after reading my own poem through a couple of times, I think I probably did not set the scene good enough, So just a quick explanation. It is about a man and woman living in the old times, when a woman had to wait seven years, before she could remarry, But her love for this man grew to strong. And I guess that is where the poem starts. well thanks again for the welcome, And yes I will keep posting, you can be sure of that.

                              Casonova


 Desire and determination,
can bring any goal within
reach.

Jester59701
Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154

6 posted 2000-04-29 10:25 PM


Welcome Casonova!
I like your poem, I hope to see more of them soon. Have you checked out some of the other forums? Talk to you again soon.
              Jester

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

7 posted 2000-04-30 06:01 AM


I like the feel of this poem.

A warm welcome,slide up to the bar,sit on down,how long have you been in this town.


Jon

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