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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-04-25 01:33 PM


Lizzie,
I hope this little poem explains what a lilac is:


A Lilac for Lizzie

The lilac bush grows thick and tall
And peers above the garden wall
Inflorescences of white
Or shades of lavender’s delight

From hardy shoots the lilac drapes
Like little purple bunch of grapes
Each grape is but a little bloom
And each gives off a sweet perfume

Majestic, tall, the lilac trees
That gracefully blow in the breeze
And fill  the air with lovely scent
That makes my spirit feel content

A hundred lilacs at a time
Luring bee and butterfly
I want to cut and gather each
But most are well beyond my reach

The full and rich lilac flower
Leans from its weight at end of bower
Please step aside, I’m on my way
To gather up a lush bouquet

The fragrances will fill the room
With scent of lilac to consume
Lavender in varied hue
Here, Lizzie, a lilac just for you

Elizabeth Santos



[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 04-25-2000).]

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Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
1 posted 2000-04-25 01:38 PM


I love this!! The words are absolutely beautiful and the rhythm is perfect =] I think this is a favorite!! Great job!!

swampfaeryie


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-25 01:45 PM


Thanks so much Liz!!! Please check your email!
This is the loveliest poem! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
3 posted 2000-04-25 01:50 PM


Awesome, Liz ... You've described the lilac perfectly !  Only you ....  
ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2000-04-25 01:50 PM


Oh Liz, your email isn't working for me! So, lemme say what I gotta say now!:

Dear Liz,

Thank you so much for this delightful poem describing a lilac that you
wrote for me!! I love it so much!! I am gonna print it out and keep it
forever! Now I feel as though I have seen and smelled a lilac and it's
lovely! That was so sweet of you to do that for me.  I'll never ever
forget it! This is the first time someone has written me a poem.....how
special that it should be from the hand and heart of such a brilliant
poet as you are. Wow, I am just totally over the moon.

Thanks a million!!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie  

*Many hugs and smiles to you my friend*


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
5 posted 2000-04-25 02:35 PM


Again I smell the perfume

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-04-25 07:49 PM


I just got back from my walk. I admired many lilac trees, dogwood trees, azaela bushes, tulips and hyacinths. Spring is indeed my favorite time of year. Your poem is lovely, Elizabeth!

Denise

Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
7 posted 2000-04-26 12:30 PM


Elizabeth.. this is beautiful.. such a nice poem for Lizzie.. yes.. lilacs are beautiful.. I love the scent.. and I could almost smell them as I read this.. such a lovely description.. u r a very talented poet. ^_^

Lynne

 

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
8 posted 2000-04-26 01:45 AM


Lizzie,
I'm so happy you liked the poem. I can smell the lilacs from my living room as I write. I have three enormous bushes in my back yard. I love it when they bloom at the same time as the bridal wreath, but that doesn't happen every year. What a wonderful bouquet the two make together. You certainly honor me with your words, Lizzie, and the fact that you would keep this poem. I appreciate your reading and commenting to so many of my poems. you warm my heart
Love, Liz

Swamp Faeryie, Gosh, I had a hard time spelling your pen name. I'm already a terrible speller to begin with! hehe. Thanks for your kind response

Pepper, Wish you would come up here and enjoy them with me. Miss you

John, The wind must be blowing your way. Enjoy it, because the lilac doesn't hang around that long

Denise, Isn't it beautiful right now? Now all we need is a little WARMTH! Thanks, dear

Lynn. I appreciate your comments so much, because I admire you poetry so. You are the talented one

Liz

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