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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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A Dream’s a Dream I soared the sky on wings of dreams With eye upon a star Following the misty beams To visions from afar Hurricane and storm and wind What pain God may impart Were weathered by the strength within And yearnings of the heart The sunny days of happiness The days of dark and strife Were all consumed with eye above Toward dreams of better life With eye turned upward every night In view of distant sun That far celestial star so bright A dream I could have won But I was always drawn back down By forces from below It seems that voices on the ground Would keep my gliding low With blemished quill and battered wing I left those dreams above For I couldn’t vision anything More real than family’s love A dreams a dream, but I would find Those things of greatest worth Are in a little child’s mind And live right here on earth Elizabeth Santos |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Liz your verse is wonderfuly graceful and crafted with great skill.Very Very nice. Jon |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a lovely poem...reminding of the wonders found on Earth in a child. Beautiful, Liz, simply beautiful. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Liz, Oh, to dream with the un-repressed freedom of a child. This was a delight to read. Beautifully written. ~Gene [This message has been edited by u_gene (edited 04-19-2000).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Liz, this is so magical. The flow and verse and the way that you expressed the experience with your words were all perfect. How lovely it is to see the wonders of the world through the eyes of a child. You have such a way with words! Applause! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well written, Elizabeth! You certainly have your priorities straight too! This is beautiful! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I will ditto Denise, Liz .... Beautiful work here ..... |
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Kurly Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48 |
Dear Liz, Your poem is the perfect definition of a dream and imangination, and I think you grabbed my poem I just wrote (lol) new idea needed, |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
..... well, I can't give many compliments that have not already been given, but all of them are true.. this is wonderful, Liz.. as always, I love your poem.. a delight to ones mind.. hehe.. Lynne |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
What a truly wonderful poem. A true gift you possess. |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Wonderful poem Liz Your use of the language makes the reading a joy Jack |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Lovely Elizabeth...Such beautiful words joined to make even better verse. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lizzie~ Nothing more beautiful that a family's love and a lovely poem to express it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you to each one of you for your lovely comments. Kurly, I'm sorry I wrote your idea, but it was by mental telepathy. hehe. I would love to read yours. Is it posted? Thank you all again, I have read and enjoyed so many of your poems Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz, this poem is perfect! |
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