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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Late Everlasting Always here Through all of the sting And more of the tears Fighting for your life In a hospital bed Gunshot to end your strife Wishing you were dead Everchanging melodies Never tempt fate Silent plees And now you'll be late Late to be with your daughter She is only 3 years old Late to be with her mother You left our bed cold Fallen but not broken How will we get along If in life this is my token, I will live with you gone Hope, Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
VERY SAD BUT ALSO RESILIENT,NICELY WRITTEN ALIICIA. jON |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Well!! ^_^ This is very nice.. sad.. lonely almost, but very nice.. I compliment your talent ^_^ Lynne |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a very emotional poem and very beautiful and sad. Ditto the above compliments on your talent. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
I could relate to this Alicia Especially, the first 2 verses It touches deep within. I suffer from Chronic Pain Very Good.....! Poetry & Frienship, From: PrincessPoet |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Emotional poem Alica. Very good. |
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