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freckles
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since 2000-02-12
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Virginia USA

0 posted 2000-02-25 05:10 PM



Alone I sit
Alone I stay
Alone forever and a day.

It hurts to laugh
It hurts to cry
Would it still hurt if I should die?

I loved you once
I loved you twice
I cared too much and paid the price.

Alone in darkness
Alone in sorrow
Sometimes I don't care if I see tomorrow.


 

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RufffRyder
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since 2000-02-25
Posts 143
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1 posted 2000-02-25 05:17 PM


No love is worth the pain that you express in this one.
Not to say that love doesn`t hurt sometime`s
because we all know that it does.
If you were not to wake tomorrow,think of all the other`s in this world that would have been denied the chance to have a love as kind and true as your`s.
Keep smilimg and thing`s will get better.
I PROMISE

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-02-25 05:55 PM


~Freckles

Sweetie...this was very touching but so sad! I realize that was your intent. Love hurts big time, I know that for a fact. But please hold your head up, and things will get better as time goes on. Time really does heal the pain. And someday you'll see you will smile again. I realize right now you don't think it will...but it shall...

*Smile*
Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

freckles
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 160
Virginia USA
3 posted 2000-02-26 10:21 AM


RufffRyder.........thanks, I hope that my life means something to SOMEONE here on earth.  I was trying to get the pain out in a somewhat constructive way.  Thanks for the kind words.

Aimster..........thanks to you too.  Time does heal all wounds, so I've been told.  The pain is extremely great at this point in time, but I look forward to brighter days ahead (I guess).

Thanks to both of you for responding.  I'll look for your work.

Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
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4 posted 2000-02-26 11:52 AM


Lots of pain wrapped up in this li'l poem.  I can surely relate.  I know the last thing you wanna hear is Time makes it better - but it does, and will.     My heart to you.


Michael


freckles
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 160
Virginia USA
5 posted 2000-02-27 01:28 PM


Thanks for reading and responding, Michael.  Thank you too for the kind words......I guess I "know" that things will get better, it's just hard to remember sometimes.
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