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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
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0 posted 2000-02-09 01:34 PM


OK IM WRITING THIS ONE OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD RIGHT NOW SO IT PROBABLY WONT BE THE BEST. I WROTE A LETTER TO THE GUY I LOVE LAST NIGHT AND TOLD HIM I WAS LETTING GO NOT BECAUSE I WANT TO BUT BECAUSE I THINK THATS WHAT HE WANTS. I TOLD HIM I WAS STILL HERE IF HE WANTED TO TALK BUT IT WAS ALL ON HIM NOW. N E WAY HERE I GO....


LAST NIGHT I SENT YOU AN E MAIL.
I SAID I WAS "LETTING GO".
DON'T ASK ME WHY I DID IT
CUZ RIGHT NOW I DON'T KNOW.
I WANNA BE WITH YOU
BUT YOU SAY "NO".
I WANNA STAY
BUT YOU TELL ME "GO".
I TOLD YOU I WAS STILL HERE
IN HOPES THAT YOU WOULD CALL
BUT I THINK I'M SETTING MYSELF UP
FOR JUST ANOTHER FALL.
I WAITED BY THE PHONE ALL DAY.
I HAD A FEELING THINGS WOULD END THIS WAY.
I NEVER NEW OF THIS PAIN THOUGH
ME BEING THE ONE WHOS "LETTING GO".
BUT REMEMBER THIS
NOT MATTER WHAT I SAY
EVEN IF YOU GO AWAY
MY LOVE FOR YOU WILL ALWAYS STAY

      *TEARS*


© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
1 posted 2000-02-09 03:59 PM


Seems like you really love him. Letting go is the hardest thing to do. (((((Hugs)))))
just_another_fe
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2 posted 2000-02-09 04:04 PM


thank munda *hugz* this is the hardest thing i think i have ever done now im just hopin he calls
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-10 12:43 PM


this is beautiful and touching...I relate to this one..way too much...very emotional and expressive poem,
take care, janet marie

 ...baby, dont you work so hard for this prize you found...
it will all be gone when you turn around...
cause ... nothin' lasts forever anyway...
Rick Roberts-Windmills


Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
4 posted 2000-02-10 06:29 PM


I have the habit of writing off the top of my head--actually, every single poem I write is like that...but this--this had to have been thought through thoroughly! (Three t's...lol  )

I agree with Janet, this is beautiful!  


Little Spyro T. Dragon

P.S. Hi there Munda  

just_another_fe
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5 posted 2000-02-11 12:09 PM


THANX EVERYOBE  

SPYRO: ARE YOU CALLING ME A LIER OR AM I TAKING WHAT YOU SAID THE WRONG WAY?

just_another_fe
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6 posted 2000-03-25 03:43 PM


This is an old poem im just replg  to it so i can put it back up with out reposting it  
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