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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
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MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-03-11 06:42 PM


its not the best but here i go..

A Question For You
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I have a question i want to ask you
you see....
at least once a day i sit and wonder
why can't you love me?
Is it because
all i've done?
is it that you just think
"she's not the one"?
Is it because you've never touched me?
or whiped away my tears?
is it because you think
you can't protect me from my fears?
Is it because i'm here?
and you're over there?
or is it simple for you
there is just nothing there?
The answer to this question
i would like to know.
Maybe if i knew
it would be easier for me to let go.
I've thought about it but don't understand
because you see...
i love you
with everything in me




[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 03-12-2000).]

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Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
1 posted 2000-03-11 06:53 PM


How sweet!  Lovely poem.     Sorry I can't say more, but really, let's try it anyone.  *photocopies every synonym in the thesaurus for 'extremely good'*  

~Astraea



 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."



Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
2 posted 2000-03-12 03:48 PM


Angie, Lovely poem. I have the answer to your question... Maybe he needs to open his eyes and heart--and see what he's missing.  

~Gene

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-03-12 05:46 PM


~angie

this is a wonderful poem, and one that asks a very important and serious question. i have an answer to it too, cuz men are fools lol. i hope he wakes up soon and sees whats right in front of his eyes. take care,

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Sasikat
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
4 posted 2000-03-13 08:18 PM


Fe,

I have no answer for your question, but I hope he comes to realize how precious your love is for him and that he answers your question with his love for you.  Beautiful poem.

Sheila

 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

Another Heather
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 93
Canada
5 posted 2000-03-14 01:00 AM


Wow, now that's a question I've asked a lot. That last part: "You see... I love you With everything in me." totally made the poem. I loved it!

 "Be yourself... No matter what they say"
- Sting

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

6 posted 2000-03-14 03:23 AM


Perhaps one day he'll stop and hear
Open up and loose his fear
The doubt will go the mist will clear
And he'll see the beauty standing there

Love your verse

Jon

just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
7 posted 2000-03-25 04:15 PM


thanx guyz  
gene: if thats the answer can you do me a favor and tell him i said hurry up!!!!!!!!

Aimster: lol i like ur answer thanx  

thanx everyone and i hope he does to!!!!!!! i jus ished if hes gonna do it he would hurry up lol im gettin impatient! lol

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
8 posted 2000-03-25 04:56 PM


Angie, this is great.   Answers ? Oh dear, I have none. It seems Love and I don't go together.  
John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
9 posted 2000-03-25 06:01 PM


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