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Wendy Flora
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 182
Virginia

0 posted 2000-01-29 01:07 AM


Imagine a piece of glass
Infused with light
Imbued with light
So bright the glass becomes
the light, rays of
Light stretching forth,
Shooting out, a
Burst of brilliance
Unsurpassed by any
Meager display of stars
Or comets
Or suns.
The brilliance of this glassy-color's hue
Burns with all the love I have for you.



 "Well she wants to live her life,
then she thinks about her life...
Pulls her hair back as she screams,
I don't really want to live this life!"
-Train "Meet Virginia"

© Copyright 2000 Wendy Flora - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

1 posted 2000-01-29 01:49 AM


Darn, this is jaw-achingly good. Especially the stuff about rivaling the light of comets. Yum!

Mike

Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
2 posted 2000-01-29 02:17 AM


A-men to that!!  
This is beautiful, Wendy!! Very, very inspiring...and all about a force only a few people think about.

Wonderful piece!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-29 10:34 AM


This shines brilliantly, Wendy! Very lovely!

Denise

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2000-01-29 12:05 PM


This is wonderful Wendy. Simply wonderful  
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
5 posted 2000-01-29 01:18 PM


I could definetly imagine that piece of glass with the light shining through and all the love you have shining with it!
Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
6 posted 2000-01-29 03:11 PM


"...brilliance
Unsurpassed by any
Meager display of stars
Or comets
Or suns."

I like this very much. It reminds me of one of my favorite quotes.

~Gene

Wendy Flora
Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182
Virginia
7 posted 2000-01-29 05:01 PM


Thank you!   (This one was inspired by a magazine picture of a triangular prism.) -wen

 "I am everything you want
I am everything you need.
I am everything inside of you
That you wish you could be
I say all the right things
At exactly the right time
But I mean nothing to you
And I don't know why."
-"Everything You Want"
Vertical Horizon

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

8 posted 2000-01-29 08:14 PM


Wendy.
this poem is excellent..I love the imagery you painted with your words. very nice...
and may I say..you have superb taste in your Icon choice as well...(smile)
I love your signature quotes as well,Train and Vertical Horizon are two of my favs...
"Is there a trace
inside her face
of a lonely miracle...
and so you wait
and lie awake...
For a lonely miracle

**You never really know
what it is...
Not until it goes
And if it comes again...
its a miracle**
Vertical Horizon.
take care Janet Marie

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
9 posted 2000-04-14 04:50 AM


Wonderful..  
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