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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
LADY OF MY HEART, SWEET LOVE OF MY LIFE THOU ART FINE TO ME MY BEAUTIFUL WIFE AS THE DAYS PASS AND THE YEARS SLIP AWAY WHEN THOU ART SADDENED, HOLD THEY TEARS AT BAY LOOK TO THY HEART, DEEP WITHIN THY BREAST. AYE LOVE, TIS ME THERE YOU FEEL THAT SPECIAL WARMTH BEATING FROM MINE OWN CHEST. TIS STRANGE, THIS THING CALLED LOVE. BUT PLEASE MY LADY, I WOULD HAVE THEE KNOW NAY, NOT EVEN IN DEATH WILL MY LOVE CEASE TO GROW TO MY SWEET MICHELE, COME TO ME FROM ABOVE I GIVE TO THEE THE ONLY THING THAT I HAVE; MY LOVE here ya go denise...here's the first poem I ever wrote...(of course it's for my wife..hehe..She's my inspiration...hum...that's kind of a tough one to spell...lol) hope ya like it... No ROTFLyourAO.....EITHER...and be nice...I have a tender heart..and i'm shy..lol.... |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
lol Majestic--I know you probably thought Denise [dsnyder] was going to reply first, but I beat her to it...lol Good poem! The first one I ever wrote was unintelligible at any level...of course, I was seven when I wrote it How'd you like to have me write a poem with you in it? ...if you're not in somebody else's poems already... "Weird?! No, 'weird' is when you apply your human rules to where they shouldn't be applied. That's why it seems strange to you." --Ttark |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
sure...go ahead...my wife's written me a poem before...it was pretty good too... [This message has been edited by Majestic (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well I would have been here sooner, guys, if I wasn't frozen out of my computer.....arrrrghhhh.....*taking deep slow breaths* OK...I'm fine now...thank you... Well now for the poem....I think it is beautiful and sweet and I'm sure your wife would like you to frame it and hang it on the wall.....in clear view....so whenever you guys have a fight she can point *slyly* to it and say......hey, I thought you loved me?!!! hehehehehe...we love doing that!! Great poem, Keith!!!  Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
hum...i'm blushing all over here...hehehe...it kinda sorta, almost, well, you see, it's like this..lol..it is on the wall.......On a wood plaque even...i know , iknow...quit laughing little dragon...hehe...heck i even had it engraved...lol...geez it's hot in here...thanks for the kind words denise...and that goes for you too...little dragon... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is lovely Majestic A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Engraved? That's a great idea, I never thought of doing that. Thanks for the idea! Keith, maybe you could ask your wife if you could share the poem that she wrote for you with us too! < !signature-->Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
oh no....that one's mine....I'll gaurd it till I die....It's not that i'm greedy or anything...(or maybe i am..lol)..but i hope all of you will understand... hehe..i feel like one of my children saying..."It's Mine"...hehe... Seriously..It's a little personal...(and i'm a greedy kinda person when it comes to love) If thou wilt love; Love with all thy heart. Thanks for the sweet comment Shannon [This message has been edited by Majestic (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
OK! No problem! Personal is personal, after all! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oooooooh, this is beautiful Majestic ! |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
thanks for understanding denise...and thank you too Munda.. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Very touching.. You're lady is lucky.. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Oooooooooooh, how romantic and beautiful!!! I love this poem!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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