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Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas

0 posted 2000-05-03 11:35 AM


once this truck with greater strength
knocked me off my legs
only to be replaced again with braces and a peg.

there was this time i rescued
a family from its death
for they smashed into my lofty boards
stopping short of death.
down deep the valley was
behind the place i stood.
i was glad to be in pieces
as children's life withstood,
the mom and dad erected me
with a brand new face.
the writting on my billboard
now with a different view,
for the writting on my billboard says
God is watching you.


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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
1 posted 2000-05-03 11:52 AM


Marcy - This is Great!!!!!  The perfect poetic story with a terrific message.  He is always watching out for us, isn't He???  This is wonderful.  Bonnie
Jester59701
Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154

2 posted 2000-05-03 01:00 PM


Very nice Marcy,I was driving by pretty fast, and almost didn't see the billboard. Thanks for slowing me down.
Your friend,
                        Jester

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2000-05-03 02:10 PM


Marcy this is fantastic! Thank you for joining the challenge! What a story you tell, and like Jester says, we all need to slow down and notice the billboards  

Actually down town Chicago they have quite a few of those...No one knows who put them there, but they say things like...

What part of Thou shalt not, didn't you understand?

I'm not really sure what the rest say, but this is what you bring to mind. Something I really need to think about! God bless ya and HUGS

 <*\\\><

Our background and circumstances may have influenced who we are, but we are responsible for who we become.


deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
4 posted 2000-05-03 05:29 PM


Your billboard says," I'm here for God
And for Him I'll brave the blows,
If by it I can help others--
Their Loving God to Know!"

This is a wonderful poem- You've really caught the Spirit with this one!

             David

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2000-05-04 08:21 AM


Alle; this is so imaginative and what a terrific way to meet the challenge! Jesus is everywhere and uses everything to work His wonders and tell us how much He loves us. This is a wonderfully written message of His love. BRAVO!!!!   eLLIE

 02



Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
6 posted 2000-05-04 11:59 AM


Marcy,
  You have painted an enduring image, a strong , patient, self-sacrificing portrait of a beautiful soul. Well done!  Dennis :^)

sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
7 posted 2000-05-04 06:58 PM


This billboard had more than a message, it had a purpose. Thank you and may you enjoy a multitude of blessings.
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