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thumper4him
Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 27
Newport Beach Ca

0 posted 2000-02-06 02:33 PM


                   Mine
I listen
I talk
We converse
I cry
You console
We think about eachother
You care so much what I am doing
I care so much what you've done
You are mine
You are my best friend
You are my confidant
You are mine
And I am yours
I will always stand up for you
And you will guide me through
You are exactly the same but everchanging
You are no longer some distant object
You are my reality
I will share you
For I know that you will not detract from our love
I will show you to others
So they may see a part of me
For you are mine
My guilding light
My closet bud
My peaceful warrior
My newest addition
I love you
Because
You are mine
You are mine
You gave a part of yourself to me
And I now hold a promise in my heart
That you died on calvary that day
Not only for everyone else but me too
I know that if I was alone on this earth
I would still have you
For you are mine
My savior


© Copyright 2000 thumper4him - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-02-06 03:58 PM


Dear Thumper4Him; WELCOME! Your glorious poem reflects Jesus' passionate love for each of us so eloquently. I'm very happy that you have chosen to join our family here. You are in for some serious love. because everyone on this forum gives tons of it. Wait and see. I,m looking forward to hearing more from you. God bless you .

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thumper4him
Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 27
Newport Beach Ca
2 posted 2000-02-06 04:41 PM


thank you so much ellie for your comments!! I really want to be a good writer and I appreciate it so much when I get feedback.
In His Strength,
thumper4him

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2000-02-06 07:54 PM


WELCOME!! You hit the nail right on the head! You're right, if we were the only one here on earth, He still would have done the same! He is our next of kin, our true Father!  I hope to see more from you also!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-02-06 09:19 PM


Hi and I too wish to say welcome to Passions and Spritual Journeys!!!!
You have made an VERY impressive entrance...your words are beautiful and true
thank you for the compliments of my poem...I will return the envy as I seem to rhyme all the time... (see)(smile)...I would like to be more accomplished at my free verse...but the rhyme always comes... I wont complain too much..as I'm always grateful for the inspiration and gifts of poetic expression.
I look forward to reading more of your work
take care,janet marie

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