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thumper4him
Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 27
Newport Beach Ca

0 posted 2000-02-06 02:40 PM


            It's You
I woke up this morning
I felt you on my body
The sunlight on my face
I walked to class today
And felt you at my back
A slight breeze to cool the air
I saw you in my friend's today
They showed me love with their hugs
I heard you helping me along
I see you, feel you, hear you
You're around everywhere
It makes me so happy to see you there
To know it's you who's around
Because the breeze
The sun
The leaves
The stars
And me
Are here today
What's the reason?
It's you


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ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-02-06 03:50 PM


Dear Thumper4Him; I love this poem. How I could feel what you were feeling. Your writting just flows so fluently. thank you.

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-02-06 08:05 PM


Ruach...that is Hebrew for the wind, or Holy Spirit!  That's what I thought of when reading this. To find Him in the simple things of life like you have is a gift. A lot to be thankful for!    This was very pleasant!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-06 09:24 PM


like the warm sunshine on our cheeks,
like a spring breeze in our hair...
he is always there...
another lovely poem from our new friend...
we live in the light...
janet marie

 ..."when you walked into the room...I saw their faces---
did you know--you made it seem like time was standing still...
and I felt---fascination...though I only knew you then--just casually...
then you slowly turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart gave me away"....

Glass Tiger



dovesongs
Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102
Michigan
4 posted 2000-02-06 09:45 PM


I can imagine you glowing with joy as I read this poem.  Well done, nice flow.  Great description of the way God's love feels.
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