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Kevin
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0 posted 12-21-1999 11:09 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Troubled eyes
find your way
to fall upon my face,
and realize
that here today
youíll find a better place.
Donít look behind
do not waste tears
just walk ahead with me
And you will find
in coming years
forever we will be.

© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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1 posted 12-21-1999 11:17 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

The longing, encouragement and hope are all in there.  Very nice.
Denise
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2 posted 12-21-1999 11:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Kevin. I like this very much!

 Denise


Beri
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3 posted 12-22-1999 12:00 AM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Beautiful Kevin!  
Whomever this is adressed to is indeed a very lucky individual!  I must say I wish it were me!  


 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

samsonheart
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4 posted 12-22-1999 02:49 AM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

good poem Kevin, I like this a lot.

samsonheart
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 12-22-1999 05:07 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Short and sweet and very nice
Liz
 
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