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Someday

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lostboy
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0 posted 12-10-1999 10:52 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lostboy

Let me tell you one thing
I really care for you
I understand if you don't feel the same
Living as we do

It's hard to take my eyes off you
When you're within my sight
At the end of the tunnel in my mind
You're the shining light

What do you think of this whole deal
Not quite as you'd planned
If you want to take it
I offer you my hand

I know we can't have it now
But we can still be tight
And maybe someday, someway
The time might then be right

Every night I think of you
This thought crosses my mind
This is the one of who I've dreamed
And my heart won't leave behind

Someday, Someday love will find us
Someway, Someway keep reminding us
© Copyright 1999 lostboy - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 12-10-1999 01:26 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Lostboy...You are so ROMANTIC!!!!!! Your words are beautiful, Your heart so full of love...

Especially like...Every night I think of you..(The whole verse there)

Who ever she is she is blessed...To have a man as sweet and so expressive to write poems about her!
Dolphins3
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2 posted 12-10-1999 02:38 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

I agree with Romantic Heart. Keep up the great work.  
paperguardian
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3 posted 12-10-1999 02:43 PM       View Profile for paperguardian   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paperguardian

  Absolutely breathtaking!!!  Of course I'm biased because I lived through your poem... and my someday showed up just a few months ago.      Incredible work lostboy!
danni
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4 posted 12-10-1999 03:07 PM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

You are right. Someday, someway love will find us. The one you have your eye on is a blessed soul indeed.
lostboy
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5 posted 12-10-1999 03:28 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Romantic Heart, thank you my dear, your words are inspiration in themselves. I'm glad you liked this one.

Dolphins and guardian, I appreciate your responses, they mean so much
sraet
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6 posted 12-11-1999 01:59 AM       View Profile for sraet   Email sraet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sraet

"It's hard to take my eyes off you
When you're within my sight"

Don't you just love it when you have someone like that in your life? (even if you can only look at them)

Very nice, I always enjoy your posts.
Denise
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7 posted 12-11-1999 02:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! This is beautiful lostboy! Very nice!

 Denise


lostboy
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8 posted 12-11-1999 02:33 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

sraet and Denise, my friend, how nice of you to say. Hope you're enjoying the weekend, I'm working through it(UGH!)
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 12-11-1999 03:39 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lostboy,
Cute, enjoyed the read.
lostboy
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10 posted 12-11-1999 04:21 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Glad you enjoyed Sy
danni, so sorry I missed you earlier, I scrolled too fast, thank you my friend, someday, yeah!
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11 posted 12-11-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LostBoy -

Lost in these beautiful phrases, I am.
Keep your heart and eyes focused and she will appear like magic.



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
Martie
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12 posted 12-11-1999 05:41 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

So lovely love and sad.  You said it well.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
Severn
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13 posted 12-11-1999 05:44 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

LB - this is sweetly sad.
caroline
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14 posted 12-12-1999 03:39 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Sweet and romantic....I enjoyed this much  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

Eboni
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15 posted 12-12-1999 03:53 PM       View Profile for Eboni   Email Eboni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eboni

I really enjoyed reading this poem.I can only wish someday I would be as lucky as she to have a sweetie like you.

 Eboni Banks
lostboy
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16 posted 12-12-1999 03:56 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

You are all so sweet, I appreciate the responses! Hugs to ya!!
hoot_owl_rn
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17 posted 12-12-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wonderful words and with a heart like yours, you won't be lost for long  
 
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