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Open Poetry #4

More Than I Should Say

Eboni
Junior Member

since 1999-12-11

Posts 17
Texas

0 posted 1999-12-11 11:33 PM

More Than I Should Say

These feelings I have inside for you
Will not go away so they must be true

I have tried so many times to forget we ever met
But then I start having flashbacks of us
And I begin to sweat

I want to say I love you and that I really care
I want to say I miss you and for you I will always be there

So forgive me and come back to me
Cause being without you just is not fair

I know that this is more than I should say
But I miss you like crazy and I can not help feeling this way

Love T.

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[This message has been edited by Eboni (edited 12-12-1999).]

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-12-11 11:39 PM

Welcome to Passions Eboni - very nice.

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

2 posted 1999-12-12 02:54 AM

Welcome to Passions Eboni. Really enjoyed the poem. It speaks from the heart and that's what counts above all else. Love is so hard to capture and elusive even you when you think it's right there. I feel your pain in this and hope better days for you.

Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 1999-12-12 09:35 AM

Your sentiments are very sincere - We welcome you to our Passionate family....

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

4 posted 1999-12-12 09:39 AM

Welcome Eboni! Make yourself at home. Look forward to seeing more from you. I enjoyed your first post.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-12-12 09:41 AM

Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 1999-12-12 11:00 AM

Welcome to passions

Eboni
Junior Member

since 1999-12-11

Posts 17
Texas

7 posted 1999-12-12 04:27 PM

Thank you for posting your reply!!

Eboni Banks

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 1999-12-12 04:58 PM

Beautiful, Eboni! Very nice! Welcome to Passions!

Denise

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