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you will awalys be ~my forever~

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amber
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los banos, ca,


0 posted 11-15-1999 01:19 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

if you had never touched me,
where would i be now?
lost inside a silence,
still missing you somehow?

if you had never kissed me,
where would my dreams take me?
to a self concious interlude,
as to what love should be?

if you had never held me,
how exactley would the solitude feel?
like a distant breath of sunshine,
that could never possibly be real?

if you had never hurt me,
would i be strong enough to survive?
to life through all the mistakes,
and know its still okay to cry?

if you had never said "im sorry,"
where would my days be spent,
missing everything about you,
still cherishing your absence?

if you had never loved me,
would shadows overtake my heart?
left broken beneath my misconceptions,
that we would never fall apart?

if i had never let you in,
how could i forgive myself?
because your everything ill ever need,
the strongest love ive ever felt.

if i had never given all my soul,
would you have taken yours from view?
asking no more what you had,
promising to forever love you.

if we had never came to be,
what kind of life would we be living?
you are my heart, my soul, my world,
and everything is worth giving.

if destiny hadnt played its part,
bringing our love together,
i would never felt the embrace of a man,
that will always be ~my forever~
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 11-15-1999 09:25 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I liked this one a lot
RSEvans
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since 10-23-1999
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Tulsa, OK, USA


2 posted 11-15-1999 10:37 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Very nice

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JesiKa raBBit
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3 posted 11-15-1999 11:50 AM       View Profile for JesiKa raBBit   Email JesiKa raBBit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JesiKa raBBit

I realy liked this poem. I personaly just went through something that was real hard for me and your poem discribed it perfectly.
amber
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4 posted 11-16-1999 02:58 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you all for your replies, and sometimes i often find myself suprised at how much another persons words can be spoken from my own heart.
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