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She is real

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-14-1999 06:33 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

She is real

In unbelief I tribute,
A face could lay the moon away.
Eyes of a doe in play,
And hair of golden sway.

And here beats a heart taken.
A soul that is held in awe.
Touch by another rapport
With eyes that I adore.

My heart beats to her rhythm.
Subject to a dreamers mind,
Essence of grace and kind,
A heart without the rind.

Harps me into throngs of love,
Seconds seem eternity,
Gone is uncertainty
To endless guaranty.

Perhaps I overstate the preen,
But most will feel what I mean.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 11-14-1999 06:57 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I feel what you mean
I know what you feel
(You know what I mean)
Elizabeth
Isis
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2 posted 11-14-1999 07:04 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I too, know that feeling

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Denise
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3 posted 11-14-1999 07:30 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Seymour! And I too know what you mean!

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Denise

Martie
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4 posted 11-14-1999 07:36 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Seymour this is so beautiful--I think your words could lay the moon away.
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 11-14-1999 08:14 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
Nice answer, thank you much.
Isis,
I knew you would, thank you.
Denise,
Thanks for the beautiful, you are one of those hearts without a rind.
Martie,
Ah! paid back in turn, thank you so much.
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 11-14-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh my, this is absolutely beautiful. Your talents amaze me

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 11-14-1999 10:53 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot,
Read your comment just before retiring and I will sleep well. Thank you.
 
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