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vandana
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0 posted 1999-11-11 07:58 PM


When I saw your face,
I fell in love with you,
You just sit there,
And I'll keep watchinh you,
Let the sun shine in your eyes,
I'll make your life happy,
When I saw your face ,
I knew from the begginning,
You make me happy,
When I saw your face,
I could not breathe,
I feel so deep inside for you,
I would toch you,
And keep you as a picture in a frame,
I feel in love with you,
You just sit there,
Let me watch you carefully,
You're so beautiful,
I would touch you,
When I saw your face,
I fell in love with you,

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Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-11 09:14 PM


I remember a few guys who had that effect on me! Love is a wonderful feeling, isn't it?


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Denise


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2 posted 1999-11-11 09:56 PM


**sigh** I know the feeling

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