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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA 
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Dreams In quiet night I silently dreamed That I could see for miles around Amidst a garden Full of clouds I could barely see the ground Above the mountains But below the sky I await the silent dawn I sit and stare And begin to smile As then I start to yawn Sleepily I lay Upon a cloud That’s floating up in the sky I twist and turn As my fading vision My dream begins to die Again I awake Amongst the clouds To the sounds of noisy grunts To my alarm I’m standing on The shoulders of giants Better to die, and sleep The never-waking sleep, than linger on And dare to live when the souls life is gone. |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear trevor: this is a beautifully crafted poem... i'm afraid that i'm far too tired to fully appreciate the symbolism and imagery contained herein, but i'll be sure to give it a second read through next time i stumble drunkenly into the land of poesy... sincerely, just a little novacaine for your soul |
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Matchstick McGee Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 26Austin, Texas |
Boy do I love this one... I really enjoyed the eay rhythm of it in combination with the peaceful imagery. Good job! -Matchstick |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA |
Thanks a lot guys! I enjoy your feedback. Keep it coming. Better to die, and sleep The never-waking sleep, than linger on And dare to live when the souls life is gone. |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
nice poem...very good imagery!! I like the atmosphere.  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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