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In the mouth of madness
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
In the mouth of madness I do survive In this unholy place I think should I wake or should I die This unholy quest I do prusue Namely this quest id for me to find you Madness plagued my life like a open wound Yet my freedom is coming very very soon. In the mouth of madness I do survive In my last hour I surely die. For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
nice! but it's very dark, shows the shadowed mind looking toward the light of death. I'm not really sure as to what you meant but it sounds like something i've written before, i like the confusion put into words, the confused words show the state of mind, i like "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it." Henry David Thoreau Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a good poem Jytree. I hope you get the freedom you are looking for. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
An interesting view of things. You wrote very expressivly and openly. I liked it a lot. Even though it was a very dark poem, I thought that there was a little hope in it maybe...somewhere in there. Keep it up. Love Always, Michelle. |
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