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How precious a true friendship is....

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ESP
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0 posted 01-28-2000 04:11 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ESP

To A True Friend: I Love You


The day I met you
I found a friend. . .
And a friendship that
I pray will never end.

Your smile - so sweet
And so bright -
Kept me going
When day was as dark as night.

You never ever judged me,
You understood my sorrow.
Then you told me it neednít be that way
And gave me the hope of a better tomorrow.

You were always there for me,
I knew I could count on you.
You gave me advice and encouragement
Whenever I didnít know what to do.

You helped me learn to love myself
You made life seem so good.
You said I can do anything I put my mind to
And suddenly I knew I could.

There were times when we didnít see eye to eye
And there were days when both of us cried.
But even so we made it through:
Our friendship hasnít yet died.


Circumstances have pulled us apart,
We are separated by many miles.
Truly, the only thing that keeps me going
Is my treasured memory of your smile.

This friendship we share
Is so precious to me,
I hope it grows and flourishes
And lasts unto infinity.

You are so extraspecial to me
And so this to you I really must tell:
You are my one true friend,
My Guardian Angel.

Our friendship is one-in-a-million
So  letís hold on to it and each other.
We cannot let this chance of pure bliss fly away
For there will never be another.

I love you.
I will always love you.

© Copyright 2000 ESP - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
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1 posted 01-28-2000 04:44 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Welcome to Passions. What a wonderful piece you have here. A friend like this is better then gold, treasure it.  
Duchessofhearts
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2 posted 01-28-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for Duchessofhearts   Email Duchessofhearts   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Duchessofhearts

I have someone like that.I would like to ask if i could send it to her?
ESP
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3 posted 01-29-2000 04:10 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Duchessofhearts, of course you may send this poem to your friend. Just acknowledge me, yeah?

DC
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since 01-22-2000
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4 posted 01-29-2000 12:26 PM       View Profile for DC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DC

Great poem! I loved it! I sent it to my best friend because it describes our friendship so well. Keep up the good work!!
DC
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5 posted 01-29-2000 01:25 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Wow! That poem perfectly discribes true friendship. Luckily, I know what true friendship is, and it is one of the few things that holds me up though this trial of love that I so often write about. Good job!

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"
Salooma
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6 posted 01-29-2000 05:29 PM       View Profile for Salooma   Email Salooma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Salooma

Great poem....it's really touching. Do you mind if I send it to a friend of mine as well? Thanks

Salooma
eve_angel
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Australia


7 posted 01-29-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for eve_angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eve_angel

I really like this poem. It has a lot of feeling in it. it is a great first post. Keep em coming.
poe_32
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8 posted 04-10-2000 12:50 AM       View Profile for poe_32   Email poe_32   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poe_32

WOW, is all I have to say. You describe your friend the exact same way I would with my best friend. She too is my guardian angel, I'm glad that you like my poetry, and I like your poetry as well. Just the way you described it just rang a bell with me. Again, excellent poem!!!! keep them coming!   Poe  
hoppy
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9 posted 04-10-2000 01:10 AM       View Profile for hoppy   Email hoppy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoppy's Home Page   View IP for hoppy

*sitting speachless*

that was incredible!  I've been tryin' so hard to come up with a poem as this one for my own circumstances and havn't been able to. This is like perfect, almost strait outta my head and onto your paper.  This is a great piece of work!!

 "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."
Henry David Thoreau

Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.
Thomas Jono
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10 posted 04-10-2000 02:23 AM       View Profile for Thomas Jono   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Thomas Jono

wow, this poem is incredible, i wish i had the brains to think what you think when you write your poems..this is the exact feeling i have for my friend...she's also my gaurdian angel...i have no idea what else to say but keep on at it...you have the gift to write good poems like this, keep it up...

Thomas Jono
anonymousfemale
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11 posted 04-10-2000 02:41 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Shall I say welcome to Passions ESP?? LOL.

This is a nice piece though. It is lovely to know that you care about a person so deeply to express your brilliant talent to tell them.

You have beautiful descriptions in this piece that compliment the rhyme.

Very nice work ESP.

~AF~

 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

natalie
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12 posted 04-10-2000 04:37 PM       View Profile for natalie   Email natalie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for natalie

thanx for this poem, it's really a great piece about friendship, I really will send it to a friend of mine, who needs to know that I  feel about her that way, thanx for expressing my feelings when I didn't have any inspiration about it,
natalie...
Mustangbabe
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13 posted 04-10-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for Mustangbabe   Email Mustangbabe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mustangbabe

I love this poem! It describes how I feel about my guy best friend. He means so much to me. You do really great work. Keep it up!

 Fate only takes you so far!
ESP
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14 posted 07-05-2000 02:48 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!!
Much appreciated!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!!
Much appreciated!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!!
Much appreciated!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!!
Much appreciated!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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18 posted 07-05-2000 02:48 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!!
Much appreciated!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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19 posted 07-05-2000 02:48 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!!
Much appreciated!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


20 posted 07-05-2000 02:48 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!!
Much appreciated!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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21 posted 07-05-2000 02:48 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!!
Much appreciated!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


22 posted 07-05-2000 02:48 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!!
Much appreciated!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Posts 2574
Floating gently on a cloud....


23 posted 07-05-2000 02:48 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!!
Much appreciated!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Posts 2574
Floating gently on a cloud....


24 posted 07-05-2000 02:48 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thanks for all the responses, y'all!!!
Much appreciated!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
 
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