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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
I think about him everyday. How I wish he wouldn't go away. No he's so far and gone. I regret something wasn't done. He was a part of me, A part of my soul and life. Now he's gone and I regret the things I've said. Without him, my world is dead. They say he loved me, And asked how could I be so blind and not see? Now I heard he was going to come back. Yet, he found another. Maybe this wasn't meant to be. Maybe we should not have been together.............. Then he was back, and I didn't know what to do. Should I tell him how I feel? Should I tell him my feelings are true? Something inside told me to tell him the truth. And so I did, then he kissed me. He told me that he always loved me, and together we will be. So, if you love someone, No matter what. Tell them how you feel, Because this could be the real deal. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Olga-- I have told someone that i love them...the just spit in my face (not literally). But i get your point...if you dont open up to others you will never find the right one for you...great job! "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Thanx. I'm really sorry about what happened with you though. Some people just think that it's ok to hurt others that love them. They might not realize it, but slowly they push the ppl that love them away. Perhaps they act this way because they have never been rejected. I hope that you do find some1 u love who will love u back. |
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*~*butterfly*~* Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 28minnesota |
this is soo weird, ive been working on a poem identical to this. it fits everything except the end when you tell him, well i havent got to that yet. this poem gives me hope for him again, im not so nervous about the whole thing now. you wrote this better than i ever could!!!! i have a question for you, you dont have to answer it if you dont want to. what exactly did you say, did you just go with the moment or plan it or what? help! im scared of getting rejected from him, i miss him sooo much!!! id appreciate this so much, email me if you want i dont care. this poem is my favorite, cause its a happy ending  thanks!"Rely on your instincts and trust your heart." --unknown ~*~*~butterfly~*~*~ |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Thank 4 ur comment, ok well I started 2 plan it at first, and I had this whole big speech prepared, and I memorized it like a 100x. However, when I went that night to his house, I completely 4got everything I said. So I just told him whatever I thought. If u really wanna know the truth, at this point I don't even remember what I told him. All I remeber is that afta I told him whatever it is I said, he kissed me, and told me he felt the same way, and he always liked me. The next thing i know, we were making out on his bed. Honestly I think that it works out differently 4 every1. If u really feel the way u do, go 4 it. If he rejects you, then he wasn't worthy of ur love in the 1st place. Don't worry! |
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