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Olga
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since 1999-07-26
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Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-12-20 05:03 PM


I think about him everyday.
How I wish he wouldn't go away.
No he's so far and gone.
I regret something wasn't done.

He was a part of me,
A part of my soul and life.
Now he's gone and I regret the things I've said.
Without him, my world is dead.

They say he loved me,
And asked how could I be so blind and not see?
Now I heard he was going to come back.
Yet, he found another.
Maybe this wasn't meant to be.
Maybe we should not have been together..............

Then he was back, and I didn't know what to do.
Should I tell him how I feel?
Should I tell him my feelings are true?

Something inside told me to tell him the truth.
And so I did, then he kissed me.
He told me that he always loved me, and together we will be.

So, if you love someone,
No matter what.
Tell them how you feel,
Because this could be the real deal.

© Copyright 1999 Olga - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-12-22 08:49 AM


Hi Olga. I liked your poem. As a surprise to him, if he has e-mail, why not send this to him by the 'E-card' method....see the icon on the upper right side of the page? It's really a good poem and he'd love it I'm sure!


Fairy Colours
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since 1999-12-02
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Sunrise,Fl,US
2 posted 1999-12-22 11:28 AM


<font face="Courier New, Arial, Verdana" color="#8e236b" size="2">What a delightful ending. I was kinda worried when they said he found someone new. What a relief.</font><!signature-->

<font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> --A Little Fairy--
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[This message has been edited by Fairy Colours (edited 12-22-1999).]

Olga
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since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
3 posted 1999-12-23 07:07 PM


Thanx, I sent him the poem and he was very happy. I'm really glad that we're together!
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