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Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
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Fredonia, NY USA

0 posted 1999-12-03 10:41 PM


Okay...this one is kinda bad, and I know that I was trying to hard to rhyme, so it sounds kind of...well like I tried to hard.

My heart is hurting
My tears are flowing
My mind is racing
It's so hard knowing

The truth is painful
My heart is breaking
I can't stop crying
My body is shaking

Why? I'm asking
No answer is given
I have to calm down
And keep on living

I hate this life
Of dissapointment and sorrow
I hope things are better
At the time of tomorrow

But my heart's still hurting
My tears still flowing
My mind still racing
And I'm still knowing

The truth, your feelings
Are not the same as mine
They say time heals all wounds
These wounds will take some time


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