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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 1999-12-03 11:01 AM


Once bitten,
twice shy
seemed to be the motto
to describe my life.

I thought i was ugly
fat and so uncool
I was so depressed
I started to fail school.

But then I saw you
a smile in your eyes
and a smile on your face
promising no lies.

But I was a fool,
there were lots of trials.
I began to think bad thoughts again
despite your many smiles.

But now those thoughts are gone
a smile is on my face.
For I know that now...
Love has took its place.

© Copyright 1999 Lavada Miller - All Rights Reserved
Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN
1 posted 1999-12-03 10:38 PM


Beautiful little poem, you have here. I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for posting, hope to see some more!

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"Human pride sings a vengeful song, inspired by the times you've been walked on" - Creed - "What If"



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