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Misty
Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121
USA

0 posted 1999-11-28 03:33 PM


(I wrote this about a year and a half ago Im almost 16 now, no one has read this yet, please tell me what you think!)

Im a 14 year old girl.
My life is full of choices.
To me it's such a big world.
I have many pressures and voices.
I wish I could be me.
But Im afraid people will cast me out.
The true me I won't let you see.
I wouldn't say the things that come from this mouth.
I'm starting to forget who I am in life.
I've been taken over by a phony.
I could try with all my might.
Im made by others, its balony.
I started out with just trying to fit in.
But now that im in.
Im just like a sin.
Sometimes I can't believe what I've done.
I wish I could turn back time.
I'd go back to when I knew who I was.
Back before I comitted this crime.
The person before you is not me.
Believe me when I say,
That's not me you see.

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©Misty
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Krut
Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 27
Adams, Wi U.S.A
1 posted 1999-11-28 03:43 PM


hey i like it alot...even though im 17 i still know how that feels trying to find ureself...it sucks....but i guess thats what its all about....

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~lifes a journey not a destination...~
Aerosmith

Stephani
Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 32
massachusetts~usa
2 posted 1999-11-29 12:28 PM


this happens to everyone
it happened to me when i was your age
and it's starting to happen again
you'll get through

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(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
No matter if you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."



Misty
Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121
USA
3 posted 1999-12-04 02:13 PM


Iknow it really suxs
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