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A Wish For The Impossible |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
A Wish For The Impossible Fare father from above, Please send someone down for me to love. Kind and gentle, caring to, Who's not afraid of saying I love you! Nevertheless, make me the only girl he can see. Defenatly always right there beside me. Have him show me what love really is. What's mine will be his, And what's his will be mine! But please father, bless our love not to be blind. Leave old lovers in the past. Make his soft loving kisses last. Have him tender, yet hands that are strong. Let the joyful nights together be long. Words of sweet compassion. Oh, Of course have him in the latest fashion! So what im saying as I wish into the night time sky, Make him a true, one woman guy! ©Misty ------------------ ©Misty For more Poems GO TO: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644 "You died a failure because you never tried!" |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I hope you find someone like this! I never seem too! great job though! keep em' coming! looking forward to seeing more! *************** starboards ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
You know what, I don't think a such thing is real! That's why it's a wish for the impossible! ------------------ ********************************************************* NOTE: If you would like to join my campain to, "STOP THE HATE!" Please visit my website and sign Up! Thanks the addy is: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644/stopthehate.html Please join and show you care! It means alot to me! *************************************************** ©Misty For more Poems GO TO: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644 "You died a failure because you never tried!" |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Misty...There may seem like there's no one exactly like that, but trust me, there's some that come very very very close. ------------------ NOT IN VAIN If I can stop one heart from breaking I shall not live in vain; If I can ease one life from aching, Or cool one pain, Or help one fainting robin Into his nest again, I shall not live in vain. ~Emily Dickinson |
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ANON Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 30NZ |
Hey Misty, I like your poem coz I can really realate to how you feel, there was a time when i thought that I'd never find that special someone, and I to prayed for someone to hold me,trust me and love me. But somehow, my prayers were answered. Keep it up!! ------------------ |
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Laura Mitchell Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76Cincinnati OH,45238 |
Yor poem is good, I wish finding someone to love wasn't so impossible. [This message has been edited by Laura Mitchell (edited 11-06-1999).] |
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Bright Melody Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 37O'Fallon Illinois |
This is very true. Sometimes it seems that the perfect one isn't out there, but you just have to keep your chin up because you will meet at just the right time. Excellent poem. ------------------ Never frown because you never know who is falling in love with your smile. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Misty....it is a real thing, I have found my knight in shining armor.... Might I suggest don't make this your full time obsession, trust me, I've seen it ruin people. In conclusion- May your prayers come true. When it happens you'll know, just LET it happen, don't try to force it. Good Luck! ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
i believe it to be much worse to find this perfect person and then have him/her be with someone else i liked the poem though |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
This isn't an obsession of mine, i wrote this after the my so called "knight in shinning armor" left me. but thanks for the replies you guys! and im happy for those who found him! |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
just reposting it to see if more people could give me feedback |
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Stephani Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 32massachusetts~usa |
i just became a new member i did so to get everything out and to have opinions from others I'm goignt hrough alot right now i wish i could fine that perfect person or the on ei have could change to perfection though that IS imposible no one's perfect **your poems are so meaningful mine are just words that pop in my head i write it down quickly to get it all out my words are jumbled to everyone else mine are meaningful to me this is the first time in the apst 2 nights that i have ever attempted to write could you please give me some feedbakc on mine, my 1st 2 are blanks i hit the wrong button~i would appreciate it SOoooomuch~thank you misty  and keep up the good work ------------------ (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend No matter if you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Looking-glass Junior Member
since 1999-10-26
Posts 10Singapore |
Trust me, u'll find tt right person for u somedae. Btw, keep up the good work! This is a marvellous poem. |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Thanks for the caring replies |
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