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Teen Poetry #2

I Am Secure

melissaramsour
Junior Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 16
Aurora, NE

0 posted 1999-11-25 11:20 PM

I am secure enough in myself
to be able to accept where I am.

I know that I don't have to
follow the crowd.

Or be someone I'm not
just to fit in.

In the end,
God won't care

About the clothes I wore
or the guys I dated.

He'll judge my heart.
His eyes see deeper than yours.

Because I know Him
I don't have to pretend.

Hs love is truer
Than any worldly love.

I'll spend eternity happily
because I am secure today.

Comments-Please!

Thanks-Melissa

Laura
Junior Member

since 1999-11-26

Posts 26

1 posted 1999-11-26 01:24 AM

Melissa-
I think that you're poem is beautiful! I know exactly what you mean, too.
Sometimes we try too hard to do the things that really don't matter in the end. All that matters is who we are and how pure our hearts are and we'll be okay. I'll look forward to reading more of your poems!

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Laura

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 1999-11-26 10:45 AM

Very well said and so very true. I wish more young people learned this early. It generally takes many years and many disappointments to come to this conclusion. Well done.

Krut
Junior Member

since 1999-11-26

Posts 27
Adams, Wi U.S.A

3 posted 1999-11-26 02:57 PM

that was awesome...nothing does matter in the end...the only thing that does matter is what u think of ure self...and what god thinks.i really liked it...

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